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Thesis Statement Although a public high school's purpose is to prepare students for their future education. they often overlook educating the whole person.

It feels incomplete to me, but i don't know if one is allowed to have more than one sentence for a thesis.

Yes, you can have more than one sentence, leading up to or setting the stage for your thesis. You need to further define what you mean by educating the whole person. How do school's miss the mark? What can be done about it? These are questions that should be addressed in your statement.

Another Thesis A high school's purpose is to prepare a student for future education effectively done by solely focusing on academics, often overlooking educating the whole person. By not supporting classes that aid in self discovery like performing arts.

Another Thesis...more thesisy A public high school's purpose is to prepare a student for the future; however, this purpose is often not met. Due to federal and state regulations, budget constraints, and //societal stigmas// (?)of education, schools often focus purely on academics, overlooking the importance of performing arts. Performing arts must be supported in public school and become an essential part of the academic program because of blank, blank, and blank.